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Bloodborne Awakened
by Tracey Laviolette
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Synopsis (via Goodreads): Welcome to my world.
Meet sixteen-year-old Jessie Connelly. She lived a normal life until she witnesses a horrifying attack on a student at her high school. No one but Jessie could explain what happened, but who would believe her when she tells them she didn’t see what attacked another student? Jessie’s parents believe it would be good for her to spend the summer with her Grams in Weston, Florida until the suspicions cool down.
Life seemed chill, at least for the first day or two, but it’s not until she meets Jacob, Gram’s best friend’s grandson, that Jessie’s world turns upside down.
After a planned camping trip goes wrong, Jessie’s faced with something she hadn’t anticipated- Life and Death. Jacob’s decision to save Jessie sealed their fate together forever.
Enter the world of Bloodbornes—for thousands of years they have protected Claybornes from demons, and other creatures of the night who would devour the flesh and souls of humans. Demons have been drawn heavier than before to the human world, and they are searching for something.
Jessie is thrown into an age-old battle of good vs. evil and soon discovers she’s not entirely what she believed to be—but something more terrifying than just a Bloodborne. The only one who can help her is Kyle—a stranger with a red dragon tattoo on his neck.
Soon a motley crew develops with Jacob, Kyle, Jessie, and the very ancient Tristan. They must stop the horde of demons from attacking by first discovering what it is they want in the first place. The trail leads them directly into the path of not only demon hybrids, but dragons.
DNF at 2%
I received a copy from the author in exchange for an honest review. My thoughts and opinions are my own.
I normally refuse unsolicited reviews, but every once in awhile I'll take a chance if the synopsis is interesting. Unfortunately, Bloodborne Awakened was a hot mess. It was a struggle to get through the first page -- the language, grammar, and spelling were bad enough to give me a headache. Additionally, the wording was so convoluted, I had no idea what the author was trying to say, only that it involved clocks. I forced myself to read a few more pages, because stopping after a single page felt ridiculous, but it got worse instead of better. I wasn't planning on saying anything to the author, even though they'd recently emailed me about whether or not I'd reviewed their book (understandable), because I never know what to say to a person when their book doesn't work out. And then this happened:
I just noticed the update on Goodreads, and that Bloodborne Awakened was a DNF. I’m terribly sorry that you did not like the story. However, could you please give me some feed back on the particulars? I would greatly appreciate your thoughts and opions."
Aargh. I don't want to be an asshole, but I also don't feel like it's my responsibility to be this person's beta reader, you know? After telling her why I didn't finish her book, she responded with this:
"Hey! Oh Lindsi I’m so terribly sorry. I know what you mean, I have a book that I began and just can’t finish it, primarily because of the writing. So I can relate.
I do appreciate your honesty, and I’ll have to do something to fix this. I’m only disappointed with the help I received from beta reading/editing. Now, I feel bad this slipped through like it did. I may pull the book and have it re-edited. Some changes, I questioned. My husband and I have found a new editor, one whose had about 35 years in the business.
One last thing, could you possibly recommend to me one of your favorite YA books? Something that would give me an example of what you consider the top in writing, etc?
Could I possibly keep you as a friend to chat with about books and writing? I don’t talk to much, or annoy people."
Again, I don't want to be an asshole, but really? She seems like a really nice person, but at this point I feel like I'm sort of working for her? If she saw my rating on Goodreads, she could have easily went to my profile and checked out my list of favorites. Has this happened to you before? Do you respond to the emails, ignore them, or do something else entirely?
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The Snow Queen by Hans Christian Anderson
& Mary Engelbreit
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Synopsis (via Goodreads): This charming retelling of the classic tale by Hans Christian Andersen is exquisitely complemented by Mary Engelbreit's magical illustrations. Wrap up warmly to join Gerda on her quest to rescue Kay from the icy clutches of the wicked Snow Queen.
DNF at 48%
I wouldn't normally DNF a children's book, but The Snow Queen was a little too dark for my monsters, and not something I wanted to continue reading on my own. The children were abducted or spelled to stay against their will, and I didn't think it was appropriate for younger kids.
Age-appropriateness aside, I didn't really like the stories. I think they're all connected somehow, and the broken mirror at the start plays a role in people's behaviors, but it simply didn't grab my attention.
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